[Fusionforge-commits] r14106 - in branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide: getting_started introduction project_functions user_functions

Olivier Berger olberger at fusionforge.org
Fri Aug 12 12:53:36 CEST 2011


Author: olberger
Date: 2011-08-12 12:53:36 +0200 (Fri, 12 Aug 2011)
New Revision: 14106

Modified:
   branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/getting_started/getting_started.xml
   branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/introduction/introduction.xml
   branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/project_functions/blocks.xml
   branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/project_functions/cvs.xml
   branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/project_functions/file_releases.xml
   branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/project_functions/project_admin.xml
   branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/user_functions/index.xml
Log:
a bunch of proofreading

Modified: branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/getting_started/getting_started.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/getting_started/getting_started.xml	2011-08-12 10:53:31 UTC (rev 14105)
+++ branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/getting_started/getting_started.xml	2011-08-12 10:53:36 UTC (rev 14106)
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 	<section id="ug_getting_started_new_user">
 		<title>Registering as a new user</title>
 		<para>
-			To register a new user, click on the New Account link on the top right side of the browser window.
+			To register a new user, click on the <emphasis>New Account</emphasis> link on the top right side of the browser window.
 		</para>
 		<para>
 			To register as a user, you need to fill out the form with the following data:
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
 	<section id="ug_getting_started_new_project">
 		<title>Registering a new project</title>
 		<para>To register a new project, connect to FusionForge,
-		login and go to My Page section. You have a <emphasis>Register
+		login and go to <emphasis>My Page</emphasis> section. You have a <emphasis>Register
 		Project</emphasis> link in the menu at the top of the
 		page.</para>
 		<para>You need to insert the following information to

Modified: branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/introduction/introduction.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/introduction/introduction.xml	2011-08-12 10:53:31 UTC (rev 14105)
+++ branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/introduction/introduction.xml	2011-08-12 10:53:36 UTC (rev 14106)
@@ -70,6 +70,7 @@
 				</listitem>
 			</varlistentry>
 			<varlistentry>
+			  <!-- TODO: this is now SCM -->
                                 <term><link linkend="ug_project_cvs">CVS</link></term>
                                 <listitem>
                                         <para>This section describes how to manage CVS repositories for your project.</para>

Modified: branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/project_functions/blocks.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/project_functions/blocks.xml	2011-08-12 10:53:31 UTC (rev 14105)
+++ branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/project_functions/blocks.xml	2011-08-12 10:53:36 UTC (rev 14106)
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 <section id="ug_project_blocks">
+  <!-- TODO: is this a plugin now ? -->
     <title>Blocks</title>
 
     <section id="ug_project_blocks_introduction">

Modified: branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/project_functions/cvs.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/project_functions/cvs.xml	2011-08-12 10:53:31 UTC (rev 14105)
+++ branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/project_functions/cvs.xml	2011-08-12 10:53:36 UTC (rev 14106)
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 <section id="ug_project_cvs">
+  <!-- FIXME : this is now SCM -->
 	<title>CVS</title>
 	<para>
 		The CVS button shows a page that contains information on how to access the CVS repository. Use this information to configure your client for CVS access. 

Modified: branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/project_functions/file_releases.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/project_functions/file_releases.xml	2011-08-12 10:53:31 UTC (rev 14105)
+++ branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/project_functions/file_releases.xml	2011-08-12 10:53:36 UTC (rev 14106)
@@ -7,13 +7,13 @@
    The File Releases System (FRS) is used to upload files to the FusionForge site and to make these files available to the users in an easy and efficient way.
   </para>
     <para>
-   Files can be divided in different packages, and every single package can be monitored by the users; these users will receive an email every time a new file has been added to the package.
+   Files can be divided in different <emphasis>packages</emphasis>, and every single package can be monitored by the users; these users will receive an email every time a new file has been added to the package.
   </para>
   </section>
   <section id="ug_project_file_releases_administration">
     <title>Administration</title>
     <para>
-   The FRS system allows you to upload file to FusionForge and make this file available to the public.
+   The FRS system allows you to upload a file to FusionForge and make this file available to the public.
   </para>
     <para>
    You have to define a package before you can release a file. A package should have a descriptive name for the project, e.g. gforge3.

Modified: branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/project_functions/project_admin.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/project_functions/project_admin.xml	2011-08-12 10:53:31 UTC (rev 14105)
+++ branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/project_functions/project_admin.xml	2011-08-12 10:53:36 UTC (rev 14106)
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <section id="ug_project_project_admin">
 	<title>Project Administration</title>
 	<para>
-		The Project Administration section allows you to administer the project.
+		The <emphasis>Project Administration</emphasis> section allows you to administer the project.
 	</para>
 	<section id="ug_project_project_admin_page">
 		<title>The Project Admin Page</title>
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 			The Project Admin web page is where all the administration of the project is done from. To get there, log into FusionForge, and select the project from your personal page. This will bring you to the <guimenuitem>Project Summary</guimenuitem> page.
 		</para>
 		<para>
-			The Project admin page is available by clicking on the Admin tab.
+			The Project admin page is available by clicking on the <emphasis>Admin</emphasis> tab.
 		</para>
 		<para>
 			Clicking here will present you with links to Admin, User Permissions, Edit Public Info, Project History, VHOSTS, Post Jobs, Edit Jobs, Edit MultiMedia Data, Database Admin and Stats. The Project Admin page is only accessible to members of the project who have been granted administrator privileges. By default, the person who registers the project is given admin privileges. Other members can be granted admin rights by the project administrator(s).
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
 				</listitem>
 			</varlistentry>
 			<varlistentry>
-				<term>Tool Admin</term>
+				<term>Tools Admin</term>
 				<listitem>
 					<para>This section shows the links to the tools describes the tools listed under the Tool Admin section on the Project Admin page.</para>
 				</listitem>

Modified: branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/user_functions/index.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/user_functions/index.xml	2011-08-12 10:53:31 UTC (rev 14105)
+++ branches/Branch_5_1/src/docs/docbook/docbook/user_guide/user_functions/index.xml	2011-08-12 10:53:36 UTC (rev 14106)
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 	<section id="ug_user_homepage">
 		<title>User Homepage</title>
 		<para>
-			The User home page appears after the user has performed the <link linkend="ug_getting_started_login">login</link> or when he clicks the My Page tab.
+			The User home page appears after the user has performed the <link linkend="ug_getting_started_login">login</link> or when he clicks the <emphasis>My Page</emphasis> tab.
 		</para>
 
                 <para>The User Homepage contains a 4 links and 5 tabs.</para>
@@ -11,13 +11,14 @@
                 <para>The four links are the following:</para>
                 <itemizedlist>
                     <listitem><para>My Personal Page</para></listitem>
+                    <listitem><para>Trackers dashboard</para></listitem>
                     <listitem><para>Diary & Notes</para></listitem>
                     <listitem><para>Account Maintenance</para></listitem>
                     <listitem><para>Register Project</para></listitem>
                  </itemizedlist>
 
 		<para>
-			The five tabs contain the following information:
+			The five tabs contain the following information:<!-- TODO: this is no longer exactly like this in 5.0 : (codendi) widgets appeared -->
 		</para>
 		<variablelist>
 			<varlistentry>
@@ -69,7 +70,7 @@
                 <para>You have two possibilities:</para>
                 <orderedlist>
                     <listitem><para>If you want to change the language for your account, then go to
-                                    My Page -> Account Maintenance and then, select <your language> 
+                                    <emphasis>My Page</emphasis> -> Account Maintenance and then, select <your language> 
                                     as language. And submit.</para></listitem>
                     <listitem><para>If you want your language for accessing FusionForge (even without being logged), 
                                     then it's defined in the configuration of your browser. You should 




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